WRITE THE TITTLE, YOUR NAME AND COURSE FIRST.
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DEADLINE: 30th NOVEMBER.
NO MORE THAN 150 WORDS.
ORIGINAL STORIES ONLY.
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USE SIMPLE PAST AND PAST CONTINUOUS.
DEADLINE: 30th NOVEMBER.
NO MORE THAN 150 WORDS.
ORIGINAL STORIES ONLY.
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Name:Christian Campos Valadés
ResponderEliminarWhen I was a teenager, several older girls from my school went to an old, deserted plantation house to hold a séance. They sat in a circle on the floor, placed a candle in the center and began trying to reach spirits of the dead. For whatever reason, they called upon the spirit of the Headless Horseman. As they held hands and murmured encouragement for the spirit to contact them, a sudden gusty draft blew through the enormous old room and the candle was extinguished. One of the girls began screaming and screaming in agony. In terror, the other girls grabbed her and they all ran out of the house. The screaming girl kept sobbing and sobbing, "My back! My back!". The other girls pulled her shirt up to see why she was in such agony and discovered a lash upon her back, as though someone with a horse whip had dealt her a cruel, warning blow. None of the girls believed that the Horseman ever actually existed, they were just playing around and trying to scare one another. But undeniably, something quite terrifying did actually exist and reached out from beyond to either inflict harm or a warning to a group of young girls dabbling in a realm they were obviously neither safe nor welcome in.
THE WITCHES GET UP
ResponderEliminarThe long awaited Halloween had finally arrived, the children were about to leave for its sweets and then meet to tell stories of terror. But this time something special happen. Instead of meeting at the usual place they would in the abandoned cemetery on the outskirts of the village, everyone was nervous but tried to hide his fear.
In the quiet place was so deep that imposed silence. The children began to arrive and sat forming a ring around a lamp that lit their faces only. The biggest of them began to tell the legend of the cemetery:
... It is said that at this site were buried three witches and that thereafter every year on Halloween souls rise from the grave to haunt those who do not believe in them ...But ... who is making noises? Is there someone hiding?
All were worried, maybe some of the older children had been hidden to frighten ... Then he heard the twelve strokes of the pealing church in the distance ...The children held hands!
The torch fell to the ground to shut off and the wind began to blow! The moon looked bigger and dark!
We return to our homes this has ceased to be funny! Said one of them, and then cried ... What is it Heaven?
The graves seemed strange and ghostly floating out figures, had never seen anything like it. They wanted to run but his legs were hardened by fear.
A chilling laughter shook the cemetery! Finally able to react and small ran out of that horrible place! When they were safely in their homes promised not to tell anyone what they saw, but from that night never made fun of telling stories about the abandoned cemetery.
THE END
Made by: Islam raghay allaoui 1ºbachillerato C
Horror Story
ResponderEliminar• The night was cold and rainy winter; Marcelo was driving his truck along a secondary road and poorly lit. Marcelo was reading a sign that says: rest area 2 km, after the sign at the bottom of the road he saw a girl with long wet hair and dressed all in white.
When Marcelo saw her, he stopped next to her without hesitation. She got in the truck. Marcelo asked her: Who are you? How did you come here? She did not answer anything.
Since when they were only a few meters of the rest area the girl said with a gentle voice: go more slow, Marcelo looked her and dropped his speed. Just after that, the truck was hit and almost derailed. Marcelo asked in amazement: how did you know? She said nothing.
Opposite it was the rest area, he saw some ambulances and a crowd of people, he got off the truck to see what had happened, and saw a car crashed into a tree next to the road and a girl all dressed in white and long hair dead inside.
BY:Carlos Alejandro Fenoy Manzano
CALL FROM THE ABYSM
ResponderEliminarIt was long time ago when I worked in the police, one day I received a strange phone call:
"Police Station" -I said with my grave voice-
"Good afternoon, Agent Miles" - said a strange female voice-
I don´t know how she knew my name, but I figured that my fame was big. I asked what she wanted and she said to me:
"Tonight a crime will happen at number 7 Sullivan Street, and only you can stop it" -She said and the call ended...-
I spent very hours thinking ... so I went to the address she said to me.
When I arrived at the apartment the door was open and a woman was unconscious on the floor, maybe I came too late ... Next she woke up and thanked me for saving her from a monster, I was surprised because I didn´t see anything of that.
The next day I received a call from the strange female voice again:
"Thanks for saving my mother" -She said-
"She was your mother? Where were you?"
"That doesn´t matter"
"Can you say me your name?"
"...Beatrix "
When I finished my work I asked the woman if she had a daughter and she told me no.
(...)
3 years later I ended marrying the woman that I saved in Sullivan Street and finally we had a daughter, I called her Beatrix.
THE END … Or not?
By: GABRIEL ARAGÓN ARANDA 1ºC
"Unseen"
ResponderEliminarHelen was seventeen and she never imagined that one night would change all her life.
To earn some money, she offered to take care of their neighbors' son, Ben. Helen made dinner and put Ben in his bed up in his room, then she turned on the TV and didn't realize as she fell asleep on the couch.She awoke of a strange noise and decided go up to see what was happening, when all the house's lights have turned off and she heard a scream. When she came in Ben's room, she saw the child crying gripped by a shadow with yellow eyes and big sharp claws!When he wanted to approach, it disappeared with child into the darkness of the room.Helen scared, called police but when they arrived no one believed her history.
Since then poor Helen never could get sleep peacefully and year after, afterwards suffering paranoid she was admitted to a psychiatric hospital.
Oksana Symotyuk 2ºA
The Music Box!!!
ResponderEliminarA long time ago a group of five friends called Rachel,Caroline,Michael,Cris and Fran wenton excursion to the forest to a rural house with the school.
In the girl´s bedroom there was in the wardrobe a door that was leading to a passageway.
It was very dark full of spider´s webs,at the end of the passageway there was a small room full of ancient portraits and in the middle of the room there was a music box,with evil music.
this box contained letters of a girl called Susan,who died murdered,together with the rest of this family by a stranger tho whom they accepteds on a cold night in January. She lived in this house with was a mansion, before when they read this,Rachel, Cris and,Michael believed that it was a jike and they threw the letters into the garbage.
The next day, the five friends went an tripto th eforest,but suddenly Rachel,Cris and Michael dissapointed. All the school wew looking for them,but they found nothing Caroline and Fran returned to the rom to look for clues , at this moment a school friend arrived,called Virginia,suddenly her mobile sounded with the same evil music of the box,and the light started to turn on and off,and the windows to open and to close ,until the light switched off,the door gave a slam and the window opened and,Susan´s ghost appeared,who told them that they musn`t look for their friends,because they wouldn´t see them anymore.
They rapidly understood that they must leav everything tidied up ,in order to be forgiven by the ghost,so they started to look for the letters in the garbage.
Mean while Rachel,Cris and Michael were lost in the forest,which was hounted,the roots were lifted and the forest changed shape so they couldn´t escape.Michael and Cris did in an attack by wolves while Rachel were still lost.
Caroline and Fran found the letters,put them in the box and left in the passageway.
At this moment they returned to the past,the moment when Rachel,Michael and Cris took the music box of the passageway. Fran and Caroline explained everything,for this reason they released the box and everything was back to normal.
THE END!!!
By:Virginia Ruiz Rodriguez 1ºBachillerato C
Hello for all teacher,my name is Chaima Kandil 1º BACH.B
ResponderEliminarTHE RECORDING OF 31 OCTOBRE:
A group of students had for hallowen,they decided do alittle theatre to surprise the teacher and firends.The project had to grave in very dark city and the ghosts,pumkins..have to appear.The students had to invent the story and rehears it in far and dark city.
In the evening , the sutdents went to a very far mountain and when they arrived theare they found many trees and behind it had a very big and dark house,they entred the house,but ther were very scared because there wasn`t any body in the mountain,well,when they entered the house they saw many thing broken ,they found many costumes of hallowen on the floor,but while they were trying the cosyumes,Sarah heard terrible sounds through the window,she went,nobody heard the sounds,only Sarah ,so ,her friends didn´t believe her,and they began to write the story ehile ther were listening to music in their phones,but Sarah didn´t listen to the same music which she her friends listened ,she was listening to other music while she was writing the story ,but nobody believed her.Peter decided to go to the second floor to take the camera to begin recording the house,when he was climbing the room,he heard the other music and very loud,but he didn´t see the camera,however hr saw the shade with her camera was on.The door closed down and Peter didn´t appear.When Sarah finished writing the story,she was very distressed,she didn`t know why, she asked her friends for Petter but nobody knew whwere he was.Michel climbed the room,he found the door broken and the camera on the floor,he cought it and he thought Peter had gone to this house,he and her friends hang up drawings of ghosts,spider,pumkins..they turned off,but suddenly Sarah was heard peter´s voice,but this time Michel heard this voice too,so,he belives Sarah ehen she heard the different musci,the window,they both knew there was someone else in the house,however,the rest of friends didn`t know anything,Sarah and Michel saw a shade,they cried and so,all the sudents cried ,they heard terrible music ghost and many dark shades,but the strangest was the laugh which Sarah and Michel heard strangest. All students didn´t appear,only Sarah managed to survive,nobody knew how.
Three years later she wanted go back to the house ,when she went,she found all the costumes to on the floor and the camera too,but the strang was the camera,it was opened and when she pressed play she could see all the story of 31 Ocotbre because the camera was on but finaly in the recording she saw Peter with a dark shade working in the house ,Sarah closed the camera.
Sarah ghasn´t appear until today.
Peter kill his friends?
but why?
did not know that there were ghosts in the house,so...
THE END
by: CHAIMA 1 BACH.B
Left For Dead
ResponderEliminarIt was a cold winter night , and I was returning home. I was tired after a hard day of work.
The streets seemed to be deserted. Only the light leaves of a newspaper were rustled by the frozen wind.
I went up the 4 steps to the front door of my house, when I felt a fleeting presence right behind me.
- It must have been my imagination - I thought while a shiver ran down my spine.
I opened the door. I hung my coat, everything was in silence.... in too much silence....
- Ziro? Where are you? - I called my dog
Suddenly I heard a strange sound in the kitchen. I approached slowly and stealthily the kitchen, when, before I could reach there , I saw the shadow of a man devouring my dog and blood stains all over the kitchen
Quickly, I ran towards the telephone to call the police ... but it was busy.
Without knowing what that to do, I took the car keys, those of the house and the coat, but, once I had gone out of the house , I got paralysed when I saw thousands of zombis wandering in the streets without course or direction.
A Zombi plage was overrunning the planet, and I was the last survivor....
By: Pablo Novoa Palomo 1ºC
Name: Sergio Serrano Pérez 2º Bachillerato B
ResponderEliminarTHE ETERNAL CITY
Max and Tiffany werw travelling, they we're on holyday, so the decided to do a great travel, in that moment, they were in Graceland.
-This is a good place! -Max said-
-Yeah, but I like to travel a little more. -Tiffany Said-
-This place is perfect, but... let's go to other site.
-Thank you darling!
They get the car an take the road.
-The car is full of gas -Max said- so que can drive a lot.
After an hour driving, Max saw a sign.
-"Paradise city: a place to stay and don't leave" It sounds great! Let's stop here.
-I don't know... Somethin is bad with this town.
-Oh come on! I'm tired and I am getting hungry. Let's eat something and then, we left the town.
-Ok
They went out of the car, the city was huge, and in the center, there was a concerts zone, with lots of chairs.
-Look! this café looks good. -Max Said-
-Ok, let's in.
The cafe was like old-fashioned, like in the 70's, al in the town was like in the 70's.
-Excuse me, -Said Max- can we get some food?
-Of course sir! -The charming waiter gave two the two big hamburguers.
-Mm! This is very nice!
-Thanks sir! Ehh... were do you come from?
-We're from Virginia.
-Mmm... strangers, why don't you assist to the conter of this night?
-Thank you, but we have to comeback to the road.
-Ok... but you will return sir...
-Mmm... I don't think so... What I lend you?
-Nothing, we invite.
-Thank you, bye.
-See you this night sir!
They mount in the car, and they return to the rad to continue his travel. But then, a wheel of the car exploted.
Later, a breakdow van arrived.
-Can I help you?
-Please, can you repare the wheel?
-Yes, but I can't do it here, I have to take the car to my garage, in the city.
They comeback in the town and the night arrived, now, all was more dark, all the people was in the street, watching to Max and Tiffany.
-Sir, I can't repare the wheel today, why don't you sleep in the town tonight?
Max was thinking in the waiter, how can he know that they were gonna to stay in the city that night? He was nervous...
-I think I can't choose -Max said- we're gonna sleep here tonight.
-Max, i don't like this. -Tiffany Said-
-Neither me, but be quiet, tomorrow we'll leave this place.
-Let's eat something, and don't worry, nothing can happen to us.
They entered in the same café...
-Oh! Welcome again sir!
The face of the waiter, was very thin, like dead.
-Hello...
-Sir, you'll go to the concert tonigh.
-I said no, and I'm still saying no.
-I'm saying that YOU WILL GO TO THE CONCERT, or you want to stay with me...?
Then, the waiter started to vomit worms, and he stabbed himself.
-What the...! Tiffany! RUN!!
They mount in the car, but it was without gas! The ran, but the people get the and slept them.
When max woke up, he was in the concerts zone, sitted in a chair. Tiffany was with him.
-What happened?!
-I don't know, but we have to get out of here.
They woke up, but a man, sitted the again.
-Excuse me sir, no one can leave the site since the concert has finished.
-And was the duration of the concert?
-THE ETERNITY!
After that, the man extract a knife from his neck and then, he stabbed Max and Tiffany, and the concert started...
All the chair were ocupated with people like Max and Tiffany, strangers stabed and abandonated in the chairs, dying, and the, the cut their body to do the famous hamburguers of the city.
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THE END!
I like the virginia's story (1c), it's very good terror story . Opens the story about presenting the characters, and closes with the ending what return everything to normal .
ResponderEliminarSo , good plot , good structure !
yang
I like the story of Carlos Fenoy because is a story very famous and mistery. I think that the story is very well write. think that he deverses the premium
ResponderEliminarLucía Barrera Pérez
Gabriel Aragón Aranda
ResponderEliminarWell, in my view, Pablo's story is very good, because the dog died and I laughed very much! and the title is very good.
Horrory Story
ResponderEliminarWe were in a house. I'm David and my friends were John and Willliam. We were coming in the house when John said: "why come we here?" And I answered: "Because the door is open." We turned to the kitchen. There had more knifes ordered carefully. Later we eterned the room. And in a chair there was a man. The man stood up and he started to scream. We escaped of the owner of the house. We were scared. We ran but the front door was closed. We went to the next room and we closed the door. This room was the bedroom. We listened to the man, He was scratching the door. The only way out was the window, but this, also, was closed. The man had trapped us. In last moment David said:"You see hatch." And I said: "Good idea." We were searching something. Can to pull the hatch. When we did, The man stopped. And we left. In this moment the man legt the kitchen with a knife and run after us. We left the house for the back door. And we went out of the strange house.
Jerónimo Cabezuelo Ruiz...................1º C
I like the Christian Campos Valadés story. It's interesting. I don't know what can I say about it, I simply liked it. I think I prefered it for the invocation of the Headless Horseman.
ResponderEliminarRaúl Lorente Borrego 1º Bach C
Juan Antonio Trujillo Angulo
ResponderEliminarBorja Manuel Arroyo Ortega
Vote for: Virginia Ruiz Rodriguez
Because The Story is Mysterious and It's well writen
i think that the best story is : "Call From the Abysm", because the story is very thinked and in the end, is a vicious circle.
ResponderEliminarPablo Novoa Palomo
Elizabeth Guirado and Noelia Porras 1ºC
ResponderEliminarWe read the stories and I like them.In general they are good but in our opinion the story of Carlos Fenoy is the best. This story is intriguing and confused, although the end is extrange because we don't understand as the girl to end up in the other car. Although the story is short, the content is good.
Pablo López Gálvez y Virginia Ruiz Rodriguez
ResponderEliminarLeft For Dead:
This story,in our opinion are very interesting because is very original,no one has written about zombies and the end of the world.
Alicia Ramirez Gallego y María Escobar Romero. 1º C
ResponderEliminarWe had read the horrors stories and we think that Virginia Ruiz's story is the best, because is very interesting and it has got a good context.
The Story is about a group of friends that have got an adventure with the ghost, but finally everything was solved.
The other stories that we like is by Gabriel, because the story is intrigant since the police didn't know what was happened, and the end he got married with the woman and they had got a girl that is name is: Beatrix, with the same name that the girl rang the police.
CONFESSIONS
ResponderEliminarI was walking alone when this story came to my mind again. I can remember it perfectly, though I'd like not to. It's just engraved on my memory, however hard I try to erase it...it forms parr of me. Each time I pass through that place, that frightening narrow street, memories got to me like icy water. I am not able to fight them, so I let myself be carried away with it.
I can remember each detail. It was a really cold day, the kind of day in which you feel something terrible is going to happen. There was a full moon in the sky, so the night wasn't so dark as it should be. I used to like watching the moon, but that night, it had something peculiar abd terrifying. I didn'e know why, but it sent shivers down my spine every moment. Perhaps my fear was caused by its strange red colour, like a bloody shine. Anyway, I tried not to think about it.
I should have been brave. I was alone, but he would come soon... and that was my only wish. I clung to it with all my strenght. Meanwhile, I was trying to relax, to ignore all those ridiculous thoughts, when finally he arrived.
I saw him, and I felt safe again. He shoud notice my absurd fear while he was embracing me, but it vanished inmediatly when I felt his warmth. I believed that nothing could hurt me, nothing could be scary enough to make me shiver. Never again.
But I was wrong...Suddenly, the body I held became frozen, so much that I thought he was not alive. I look at his face. There was something nearly imperceptible, a really fine change, but I was sure his face was different. The skin was paler than ever, his expression has got violent and mysterious, in a frightening way. His eyes...they left me breathless. They were petrifying, scarlet like blood, like the moon I had seen before.
My worst premonitions had come true, but I never expected he would be one of them. I never thought my first victim would be just him...why? It was terrible...I really liked him. Maybe I really loved him. No! I could not...I was a vampire hunter...How could I stand it? How could I hate him so much now, if I had loved him so much shortly before? How could I hate enough to kill him?
"He's not good for you" I thought again and again. "Vampires are not trustful, they are killers..." But then, while I was trying to convince myself, he looked me in the eyes. In spite of their paranormal bloody shine, I couldn't help but feel I could trust trust him. "He can't be anything bad...It can't be possible" shouted my heart, over my conscience. "He really loves you too"
Just then, he sank his sharp teeth into my neck...Because vampires drink blood by nature. Vampires deceive people to get it. Vampires seem mysterious, fascinating, enchanting. But are no more than murderers...no more than enemies. I felt so stupid...
He was drinking my blood when suddenly he stopped. I felt rather weak, too weak to put paid to him. I couldn't open my eyes anymore, but I could feel him carrying me slowly. I haven't forgotten the pain I experienced just then, like if everything inside me was burning and changing. He caressed me softly and I fell asleep...
The last thing I can remember is a terrible thirst. Not a normal human thirst, you know...
Now, I'm one of them. And I can't stand it.
Marina García 1ºC
We like the story''The music box''Because it's a thrilling and spooky story
ResponderEliminarthis is story is about a group of friends who went to the country where they installed in an old house two of the fiends found an small box, that contaid a lot of letters of a girl, who died murdered.
three of these friends threw them into the garbage,
and the next day they dissapointed.
finally so that the childrens appear the other friends searched the letters again and the girl forgave them.
MªJesús López Merino
Rafael Muñoz Benavides
Patricia Cano Bazalo 1 Bach B
ResponderEliminarPARANORMAL ACTIVITY
Ten years ago, a family from America went to live to a house near the sea.
There they lived: the mother, the father, the oldest daughter, the baby, the dog and the cleaner.
One day strange things it started to happen, the furniture was moved while they were sleeping.Then they decided to buy cameras and put them in the whole house.The following day, they saw as the things were moving alone.
They didnt know that babies and dogs can see spirits, the mother always saw the baby looking at something.
The cleaner knew that in the house there were spirits, but the father told her that she should leave the house, because she was scared of his wife and his daughter.
One night, the daughter was alone with the baby, she didnt sleep in her bed but in the sofa, a strange voice got her up.
She was frightened and she talked to her mother, the mother was frightened too.
The following morning, the mother was strangled.The father phoned the cleaner.She "cleaned" the house of spirits, and sent them to another house.
It was eight o'clock in the evening, she have already eaten and was wearing pyjamas. Cristine's parents and younger brother were in the house of a neighbourd in a Halloween party.
ResponderEliminarCristine likes the scary stuff, but her friends prefered a "sleep-over", it would be silly, tought Cristine.
In the beedroom they were chating, eating popcorn,...
The bell rang, and fight people rushed and opened the door.
-"Trick or treat", six or seven childrens were dressed up.
Cristine grabbed a bag of candy from the cabinet in the entry and gave it to the children.
They were throwing cushions and dancing, when the doorbell rang again, they rushed again and Cristine have already caught the candy, opened the door but there was no one there.There was a letter on the floor.
-Open it, run.-said Susan nervous,maybe it was from a fon.
Cristine opened it and began to read.
"I want you to do everything I order,no mistakes or you will pay".You're going to go out one by one.
It's a perfect day to go unnotice.
All remained frozen.
It's a joke, sure-said Silvi.
They didn't know well what to do.
The phone rang, Cristine connected the loudspeaker so that all could hear.
"hi Cristine, are you okay?, I've you need anything call me",it was her mother.She took a deep breath.
When they were more animated again, the phone rang.
A"crrrrrrrr" was heard and a voice said-"Is the time",you come-out first Cristine.
The previous day they had been watching scary movies and Cristine thought her friends were stranged, because they didn't like them.
They remembered the movies and were even more afraid.
The five were terrified, Susa was crying.
Meanwhile, in the house opposite Oscar and Marcos laughed with binoculars in his hands.
-I'm going out, what will happen?, said Cristine.
-No, please. I'm frighteneed. Call your parents- Susan said.
-Maybe the will not let me do more parties- Cristine.
Crisitine opened the door and went out of the window and her friends looked on, nothing happened.
Suddenly, riiiiiiing!!
All faces turned towards the phone, scared Susan turned te loudspeaker on Nicole looked across the window - Cristine no!- shouted-
-Already I have one. I want all you to leave or I'll kill Cristine.
Crying, screaming, they dind't know what to do.
-We will leave, no he can catch us -said Nicole.
They were cold and crying.
They opened the door, nothing could be seen.
When the arrived at the porch, three men were masked.
They run but fell hurting.
They run into one of them,took off his hood.
-It's Susan!-said Silvi.
-What happens to you?,it's just a joke-said Cristine.
Oscar and Marcos came with their faces uncovered.
Suddenly, Cristine jumped back.
What she saw,she couldn't believe.
Her friends had their eyes covered in blood, white skin, dark circles... they looked dead.
They weren't her friends...oh yes...
Cristine,Oscar and Marcos run a shouted.
Her friends were rising,ther nails were blue, their bodies different.
Cristine looked petrified.
For Cristine, that moment Halloween had begun.
I think the best horror story is ¨confessions¨ by Marina; Because it is the best story, in my opinion is a bit long, it should be shorter but sure it is the winner, it is very well written, it has not faults, it is well explained, and also it is intriguing and interesting, it is perfect! My vote is for her. By: Carlos Alejandro
ResponderEliminarI think the stories should be judged according to the rules so that all are equal, there are also stories that have misspellings, many exceed the word limit, and if it is for votes, all courses should vote. I hope this is taken into account.
ResponderEliminarThis is an interesting opinion. I would like to speak to you in person.
ResponderEliminarI'm afraid the stories are not perfect but I can only publish or reject them and I think they are interesting.
About prizes, the selection of the best stories is made by the teachers of the English department but of course, any student can express their opinion and preferences.
When will be named the winner?
ResponderEliminarMarina Trujillo Tirado.
ResponderEliminarI DECIDE THE NEXT PERSON.
All this had surpassed me.I just wanted to prove my theory that dreams are connected to subconscious by means of the activity that electroencephalogram registered when brains are in coma.I even invented a machine that keep brains alive!
But I have ended with the basement full of corpses.Smell begins to be unbearable.For a moment I believed that I was right and I tried to make sensed to my actings. I was just a scientist who wanted to prove a theory and go down posterity.But my motivation wasn't just scientific.I liked how the throats compressed when I constricted my victims with my hands.I enjoied being God,choosing who dies and who lives.
This has gone too far and I decided that the next person who dies, will be me.
I Don't mean to offend anyone, but I WON'T participate anymore in this competition, because it is unjust for everybody that to the longest story wins because the rules say that there is a word limit 150 words only! And no one has taken it into account. I think that says it all.
ResponderEliminarTHE STORIES HAVE BEEN CHOSEN BECAUSE WE THINK THEY DESERVE IT, NOT BECAUSE THEY ARE SHORT OR LONG.AND THE CHOICE WAS DIFFICULT, MANY OF THEM WERE GOOD!
ResponderEliminarTHE WORD LIMIT IS SET SO THAT STUDENTS DO NOT WRITE PAGES AND PAGES BUT IT WOULD NOT BE NICE TO LEAVE OUT THE STORIES THAT EXCEEDED THE WORD LIMIT SLIGHTLY.
I DON'T KNOW YOUR NAME BECAUSE YOU DIDN'T WRITE IT AND I AM SORRY YOU HAVE DECIDED NOT TO PARTICIPATE AGAIN. IT IS YOUR CHOICE, OF COURSE.
Some stories from the previous year:
ResponderEliminarHALLOWEN HORROR STORY CONTEST 09
Beautiful day by Oksana Symotyuk 1 BACH A
One calm winter day I was walking slowly in the park of my city.The snow was falling and there was nobody on the street,it was a beautiful day.
But suddently,some noise called my atension,I don't know why,but I decided to follow that sound (perhaps it was human human curiosity).The closer I got, the louder the noise became.It was horrified :a poor girl was lying on the snow and the man or monster was ferosious eating her tummy! Everything around was full of blood!My hands were shaking!I didn't notice that that "thing" was looking at me!
I don't remember everything but I know that I started to run as fast as I could!I could hear the beat of my heart!I looked around...the monster wasn't following me.
Since then I can't sleep well,I keep under my pillow the gun.If that thing comes back for me I'll be ready.
THE WOMAN ON THE TRAIN by Jose David Cuenca Torres 1 Bachillerato A
Sarah was having a lot of fun on her best friend's birthday party, but she had to go home because it was very late. Sarah, luckily, took the last train that night. The wagon was almost empty, there were only three people sitting in front of her, not very far. Sitting between two men, there was a woman staring at her steadily. Her hair was matted, her lips were parted and her stockings were broken. Sarah thought the woman was a junkie. The woman kept staring at her steadily. Sarah was very uncorfortable so she began to look out the window.
After the next stop, the girl looked to the group again: the two men were looking at the floor, but the woman kept staring at her steadily. Sarah's heart started to beat faster and she began to look out the window again. She was really annoyed and couldn't bear the sight of that woman. At that moment the train doors opened. A man sat down beside her and the train started moving again. She was feeling safer because she was accompanied so she decided to look to the woman directly. Her sight was unbearable to Sarah.
At that moment, the man next to her grabbed her arm and whispered to her: "Don't say anything, get down at the next stop with me, please". Sarah was horrified. Her breath stopped and her heart was about to get out of her breast. She closed her eyes but she still felt her sight, there's wasn't a escape.
The train stopped, and the man grabbed Sarah's arm and pulled her out of the wagon. She opened her eyes. The train was already moving away. The man told her: "I'm sorry, but I'm a doctor and the woman who was sitting in front of us was dead. Those men were holding her".
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The Children by Mirian Ordoñez
One dark night, that night celebrates Halloween and it was raining. A group of friends got together to visit an old school where he had disappeared years ago some students.
That night they headed for the school. They entered to school and heard strange noises and footsteps of people. At first everything seemed to go fine, however, throughout the night began to disappear some children of mysterious form.
The children that could to returned to his houses, now, they are 20 years old and last week they was visit the school again and say they found objects that belonged to them, but didn't find the children.
Finally they affirm that in the nights they feel that strange things happen, such as, hear screams, see shadows, strange noises, but, in spite of all, they continue to investigating and exploring the school, because they want to find his friends, because for them is very important