COMPOSITIONS FIRST TERM (2 BACH)

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  1. WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT EATING DISORDERS IN ADOLESCENCE?

    Many young people have a serious problem which they don't know themselves and this problem is about eating disorders.
    These persons don't eat because they think that they are fat and really they are extremely thin, but in their mind don't assimilate and this makes them weaken, also they may die, the good news is that nowadays there are centres that helpthese people.
    How do these centres help them? Well the patient can live there and the doctors choose the food that the patient should eat. The care last until the patient eats well.
    In summary, the eating disorders are very bad for the young people and for their families, but this problem has a cure so that all isn't lost.

    Antonio Jesús González Vegas 2ºC

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  2. LIGHTHOUSE:
    One of the most interesting places I have never visited is a lighthouse, in Galicia.
    The lighthouse is on the Atlantic coast.This house is small but cosy, and it is also scenic.By a window you can see the meadow with a little way and by the oposite window you can see a big steep that ends at the ocean.
    Moreover this house has a high spiral staircase that ends in enormous light bulb.
    This house is perfect to relax and to meditate.


    Virginia Ruiz Rodríguez 2ºC

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  3. A nice house:
    I have visited a house in a village of Segovia.The village is small and it has a lot of snow.From the outside, the house looked cool because it surrounded for snow.
    However when I went in side the house, I discovered that is very warm because It has a very big chimmey and it is very nice because is small.
    I like this house because is very calm, light and has beautiful views.


    Belén Cisneros Moreno 2ºC

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  4. The influence of the world of fashion on physical appearance

    I think that,physical appearance strongly influences the world of fashion,since the models are too thin,and that makes girls want to be slim and for that they stop eating so healthy and imported by provided health care to be.
    This is a very important issue that concerns many parents and their children can suffer serious illnesses such as sanorexia or any other similar diseases.
    So I think we should take serious action about this problem before it is too late because it is always going to influence more and not only in teenagers but also in the kids they see so skinny on the TV these models and in the future want to be as them.

    Dilal Littafti 2ºC

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  5. THE BIG BOTTLE

    I´m not against of the big bottle. I think that young people should take advantage of their youth in other things and not ruin their life that way because in the long term it may bring many problems and diseases because they come to a point they compete to see who can drink the most. The friends should meet but for other things to get out and walk around talking but not to get drunk.
    I think the government should do more, should control all the places frequented by young people to make "the big bottle" and put a lot of cops to fine or do something to prevent them from drinking because they not only drink.
    In my opinion I think that parents should be a little more aware of their children and see what they do and that the government should intervene and get more cops on the streets.


    Belén Cisneros 2ºC

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  6. THE WRITING TEST

    DESCRIBE YOUR IDEAL HOME.

    My ideal home will be spacious, calm because I will stay in the country, will be light bacause on the second floor there will have a big window that will iluminate all the second floor, it will also be picturesque because I will paint it in happy colours.
    My home will have a big garden, two storeys, two bathrooms, one in the first floor and another on the second floor, a kitchen on the first floor and a livingroom on the first floor. Also it will be modern with TV in all rooms and a computer that does it all: clean, wash dishes, ...
    In conclusion my house will be very cool.

    Antonio Jesús González Vegas 2ºC

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  7. SCHOOL VIOLENCE IS A SERIOUS PROBLEM IN SCHOOLS.

    Nowadays, many things happen in the schools as buying drugs between the students, fights, agression to the teacher and the students. These problems are very serious, because could provoke mental and physical damages.
    In my opinion, I think that nowadays the violence in the schools isn't a serious problem, because I don't see fights, maybe is because I'm in second of "Bachillerato" and this course hasn't got fights. The children fight more than the adolescents.
    Many colleges take against these problems such as: cameras for vigilance or a security guard. However, some of these measures are canceled for violating the privacy of students, for example: the cameras for vigilance in the bathrooms, but if they are in the street, they are allowed.
    In conclusion, these problems are very serious, but have a solution.

    Antonio Jesús González Vegas 2ºC

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  8. ARE YOU FOR OR AGAINST "THE BIG BOTTLE"? WHY?

    Nowaday many young people only think in amuse and are not content only wiht going out with their friends, but they have to resort to alcohol.
    Alcohol is dangerous for both: adults and children because too much alcohol damages the liver.
    Then the young people go out with friend to drink and amuse, and this is called "the big bottle". I think it is wrong because the neighbours can not sleep bacause these meetings are at night and in the streets. They are full of rubbish, but on the other hand they are good because you can meet with friends and amuse, althought these meetings are organized because the alcohol in the bars is very expensive, then, young people buy the alcohol at the supermarket because it is cheaper.
    In summary, "the big bottle" is fun, but isn't funny when it is abusing alcohol.

    Antonio Jesús González Vegas 2ºC

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  9. EATING DISORDERS IN ADOLESCENCE

    I think many young people are mistaken about their appearance and their food, because the young people want to be more or less thin, but some young become so obsessed with their weight and appearance that are left on the bones, so they think they are more beautiful but it is not so, because the thinner will be ugwer because is sometimes disgusting.
    Television also influences this a lot because they very pretty thin models whe many young people want to imitate to have that body but most often these women have unrealistic and unattainable bodies, most of these figures are artificial.
    I think so many stupid things on TV that people become obsessed and stop eating.
    In conclusion, I think that should not stop eating and having an unreal body and worry about things that are really important in life.


    Belén Cisneros Moreno 2ªC

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  10. 1-Eating disorders in adolescence

    In our life, the adolescence is a very important stage, because in it, we become older. So dairy food is very important to grow up healthily.
    Who doesn't like hamburguers, pizza or hot dogs? Maybe every adolescent enjoy them, and also they eat them every day. Fast food is delicious, but is unhealthy if you overeat these products.
    Sweets are also popular, although everybody know that they can cause serious dental illness, we often have them.
    In conclusion, we mustn't play with our health, so we have to have a balanced and healthy diet. For example, instead of fast food or sweets, we can eat fruit, vegetables...

    2-School violence is a serious problem in school

    For what is the school? It is for educating young people, then why is there violence in it? So I think educators are doing something wrong.
    When on person arrives at the school, the primary thing is to be aware of the fact that all knowledge won't serve for anything if you aren't a good person.
    Also it is very important that people know how to solve the problem using the comunication, and no violence.
    The environment is an important factor for children's development, and they are in the school a one per four times of the day, so if in the school there is violence, it can cause important influence on the children. To conclude, school violence is a very seious problem.


    3-The big bottle

    Nowadays, 'The big bottle' is a fashionable phenomenon in Spain.
    A lot of adolescents have a very good time on every weekend night. As an adolescent, I agree to 'the big bottle', because it is a good chance to meet new friends and old friends, we can have a very happy time together, free time to drink, dance...
    On the other hand, we mustn't have too alcohol, becaus4e it's bad for our health. we can even turn violent.
    If Spain wants to have it in undercontrol, I suggest that they can give a place for this gathering.

    The End....


    Yang, 2c

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  11. Pandora to Adrian's Christmas cards

    Dear Adrian, I want to tell you something.
    At the beginning of the year, I was going out with Nigel. But one day when I went his home, I saw him with a girl naked. I was shocked...

    Then, I decided that only a mature guy was appropriate to be my boyfriend. And naturally, when you were pursuing me, I realized you could give me security.

    At the moment that I enjoyed the happiness you gave me, you broke my dream.
    You became obsessed with sex, I tried it, but I couldn't. Every time I remembered that image of Nigel, so I was forced to leave you.

    The times passed very slowly, I felt very alone! Fortunately, you never abandoned me and always supported me. When I went Bert's home, I saw you ironing those horrible underpants, I really fell in love with you, you are so special and different. I wasn't more afraid of sex


    Do you remember that night when we were alone in my parents' bed and I burned a hole in the bed, and when I was doing canoe, I asked you if you wanted to join me? Actually, I wanted something more with you (sex relation), but you did nothing. I am not disappointed, I am really, really happy, because you changed for me.

    I want to be with you forever!
    I love you, Adrian.


    Yang 2c The book's work

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  12. SCHOOL VIOLENCE IS A SERIOUS PROBLEM IN SCHOOLS
    Bulling is some kind school harassment that nowadays we see in our surrounddings often. It is a really sad situation since sometimes parents do not realize their kids are under this menace because their children do not tell anything at home dor fear and bullies who haass or humiliate then become aware do more damage.
    I think that schools should provide further quidance on bulling to who suffer if they do not feel afraid to tell their parents or even good friends. Bulling must stop like any other type of molestation or harassment because this is a problem that can ultimately have irreparable consequences.


    Belen Cisneros 2C

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