SHORT STORY CONTEST

SHORT STORY CONTEST 2012

WRITE THE TITTLE, YOUR NAME AND COURSE FIRST.

USE SIMPLE PAST AND PAST CONTINUOUS.

DEADLINE: 5th March

NO MORE THAN 150 WORDS.

ORIGINAL STORIES ONLY.

PERFIL:PUBLISH YOUR STORY AS "ANONIMO"

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  1. Vanesa Iglesia Acuña. 1ºA

    The prince that never came

    It was a sunny day. They were all waiting for the arrival of the soldiers when a young woman asked:
    " Have they come yet?"
    She was nervous, today she would know her fiance.
    That evening he said to her:
    " Daughter, it's time to marry. You are very young, so I've chosen him for you personally. His name's Sebastian. He is a noble soldier and he's from a good family. He will come to know you as the war finishes.
    At first, the idea seemed terrible to her but gradually it was accepted. They wrote to each other. He seemed very affectionate, he always told her everything and she did the same. She was very surprised because since the last month she hadn't received anything.
    The ship arrived...
    She ran to her father and her father-in law, They were taking a stretcher covered with a golden shroud. Her father confirmed her terrible suspicion:
    " Doughter, I don't know how to say this to you but our dear Sebastian is dead. I'm sorry..."
    The end.

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  2. -Cynthia Fajardo Martín 1ºA

    THE ZOO!
    Last Wenesday we decided to visit the zoo.We arrive the next morning after we breakfasted,cashed in our passes and entered.We walked toward the first exhibits.I looked up at a giraffe as it stared back at me.I stepped nervously to the next area.One of the lions gazed at me as he lazed in the shade while the others napped.One of my friends first knocked then banged on the tempered glass in front on the monkey's cage.They howled and screamed at us as we hurried to another exhibit where we stopped and gawked at plumed birds.After we rested,we headed for the petting zoo where we petted wooly sheep who only glanced at us but the goats butted each other and nipped our clothes when we ventured too near their closed pen.Later,our tired group nudged their way through the crowded paths and exited the turnstiled gate.Our car bumped,jerked and swayed as we dozed during the relaxed ride home.

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  3. -Ana Muñoz Cortés 1ºA

    STRANGES NOISES!
    I went towards the door very frightened because anybody answered me.
    At first, I thought that it was a nightmare, but I realised that it was real!
    Maybe, the door had been opened for my mum and they had come back from dinner, I thought. But it was imposible because still it was midnight and my parents said they´d come back at one or two o´clock in the morning.
    When I opened the door, I regreted what I was doing, although I opened it... I didn´t see anybody!
    I looked for and I listened other noises from the kitchen. I took a knife and I went down the stairs.
    I went into the kitchen and... it was Toby, my dog!!
    When my parents returned, I told them what had happened and they laughed at me!

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  4. Cristina Pardo Castillo 1ºA
    Dr.HARRIS FALLS IN LOVE.
    It was early evening and I was beginning to get dark in the surgery of Doctor Nigel Harris. The young, handsome doctor was standing looking sadly out of the window when there was a quiet knock at the surgery door. The door was opening and Dr.Harris was turning round to see the young girl who had just entered the room. She was very beautiful. With a sad smile the doctor asked. Are you the new nurse?
    She immediately said yes, I am the new nurse. Dr.Harris said that this were going to see each other every day, because they work in the same place. The next day, they met in the coffee shop having breakfast everyone surgery in different tables. When they finished, they went together to work and left for lunch at midday. Everything went very well and left more days for breakfast and go out for a walk. They were very happy together and on the job every time they met they smiled. As time went by it seemed that something would happen between them. A month later, Dr.Harris asked her out and she accepted delighted. And happily, two years passed and they happily decided to get married and have a family together.

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  5. Jose Alberto Ruiz Castillo 1º A

    The story of doctor Harris

    It was early evening and it was beginning to get dark in the surgery of Doctor Nigel. The young, ugly doctor was standing looking sadly out of the window when there was a quiet knock at the surgery door. The door opened and Dr. Nigel turned round to see the young girl who had just entered the room. She was very beautiful with a said smile the doctor asked “Are you the new nurse?” She said “yes, my name is Alexandra, I lived in Málaga but now, I am living here, in New York.
    Later doctor Nigel met Alexandra, she accepted the invitation.
    The day that they met, it was raining, Harris phoned Alexandra and he asked “Do you want to come to my home? “. Alexandra answered “Yes, ok wait a moment, I am coming”
    At Nigel’s home they talked about their hobbies for two hours. They discovered that they were very similar, for instance, they were used to working very much, in addition they didn’t go to the restaurant.
    On the other hand their physical appearance are very different. She had got blond hair, her nose was flat and her eyes were blue moreover she was elegant, nevertheless he had got black hair, he was freckled, his nose was crooked and he had got a long beard.
    In spite of the fact that he was ugly she began to love him.
    One day Nigel said “will you marry me?” she very happy answered “yes, of course but I can not have any children because I am ill”. Nigel answered “I don’t mind, I will love you with children or without children”
    The day of the wedding Nigel’s parents died. The doctor was sad and he changed. He became a cruel, unfriendly and impolite person. He was cruel with Alexandra and she broke up with Nigel.
    When Nigel was alone he threw himself out of the window and he died.
    Two year later, Alexandra came Nigel’s home. She saw that Nigel wasn’t here.
    A person said her that Nigel had died because he wasn’t used to being alone. She heard that she got a knife and killed herself.
    So, that’s the end a story that began very beautiful but finished very badly.

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  6. Fátima Zahra Ed Dryouch Benaamira 1ºA
    ''An Evening with cries''
    It was a normal evening, I was watching TV alone. Suddenly, I heard a scandalous noise outside my house although I didn't think it very important. Again the same noise was heard, then I came up to the door and I opened it, there was nobody. When I got closed the door, somebody grabbed it. In that moment, I scared and I ran to my bedroom. I began to shout and I cried out for help. Suddenly, the door opened and I began to cry until I realized it was my brother watching a video of ''the most entertainin fright'' on Youtube. In the end, I think it won...

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  8. Irene Gutierrez Muñoz 1ºA


    DUEL IN THE FAR WEST


    I was sitting in the big chair in Henry’s barber’s shop at the time.Henry was cutting my hair with his big pair os scissors when we heard the sound of horses outside.
    The noise was so loud that we went over to the window to look.Through the Windows we could see at least twenty gunmen riding into town.

    Henry immediately went over to his desk and put on his gun and Sheriff badge.

    When I came out the barber’s shop I saw what was happening.Between the man who rode in to the town , I saw my enemy the Sheriff from a rival village.

    Our rivalry came from distant times, but between Lord and me the rivaly was getting greater. We both were in love with Juliet, a beautiful young woman who lived in the town.

    We quickly gathered to fight against Lord and his companions .Lord got off his horse and slowly he approached me.He told me to give him Juliet, he wanted to take her away.At that time, Juliet my beloved became scared by the noise of horses .Lord quickly grabbed her and tookher up the horse.Then he went away with her.I couldn’t stand it and rode and went after them.

    When Lord missed his shot , I could save Juliet.Excited ,Juliet kissed me and we began a relationship. After several years we got marriet and we are living happily today.

    I can remember the day when I killed Lord.I remember it as it was happening now.I had to kill him, to get Juliet’s love.I did it without thinking and I killed him, although he was my secret brother.

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  9. Paloma Godoy Gómez 1ºA
    HELL'S LADY
    It was midnight and I was alone in the house. Outside it was raining very hard- It was getting ready to go to bed when I suddenly heard a strange noise outside my room in the corridor. Then, when I looked at the door and quickly turned the key in the lock. Then I asked in a trembling voice. 'Who is it?'
    -I'm your best dream -said the voice.
    Her voice was quiet, so I opened the door.
    Here there was a pretty and very beautiful woman. She entered into my room and said:
    -You are very attractive...
    I was very nervous and said:
    -And you too.
    Then, the woman went to me and kiss me. Really, that kiss was the best! But when I looked at her again, she was very strange. She wasn't a pretty woman; she was a horrible old woman!! She was smiling. Then, she said:
    -You are already mine!
    I was very scared!!!
    Later, she held my arm and took me to a dark place.
    -Where were we?
    -In hell! I was alone because nobody loves me. So, I went to the world of the living to find someone.I looked form somebody but nobody liked me, until I saw you. Now, you are with me forever!!! -said laughing.

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  10. Cristina Sarmiento Lavado. 1ºA
    A HORROR HISTORY IN THE CEMETERY.

    It was Tuesday 13,when my friends & I decided to go to the cemetery that is next to a house very strange...
    We wanted to spend a special night,a movie night and unknowingly we found it.
    At 23:30 PM I stayed with my friends at the door of my house to go to a horror night.
    By the way the streets seemed to be deserted,only heard the fearful noise of the wind.
    At 00:00 PM we arrived at our destination,it was very dark and very cold,at first everything seemed to go well,until I felt that someone was holding my leg,I thought it was one of my friends playing a joke but it wasn't,it was an undead,a zombie!
    I escaped from him,I loocked for my friends but they weren't with me,so I ran away,behind of me had lots of zombies.
    I took advantage and got into the strabge house.
    I was surprising when I knew it was a haunted house,but in spite of the fear I hid in a corner of the house to avoid being devoured by one of these monsters that soon entered.
    I screamed in fear as two zombies were grabbing me,they were Stella & Susan,my friends,they were biting me when I suddenly woke up screaming,it was a nightmare or maybe a reflection of what would happen.

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  11. Paloma Martínez Martos 1ºA
    HORROR STORY
    A group of teenagers liked one fear adventures. Every time they were together they devised a new.
    One day they looked for an house on the outskirs of the city by internet and they found one where a wealthy family had lived for a long time and incredibly scary things had happened to them. They met on a wednesday nigth. All were going to visit the house.
    The leader: Martin, who he would be head of the group. They were walking to the house. It was nigth. They were afraid but no one could cast and baekward.
    They were laughing at him.
    The first to enter was Martin, the other were walking behind him. They took a long walk around the house with the flashlights and they searched every comes.
    Sudenly a loud was heard from somewhere.
    They ran out, no longer there again. They never told anyone what had happened.

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